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Title: The Moon Ain't Got Nothing on You...
Pairing: Onho
Rating: PG-13
Genre: AU, alpha/omega, romance, smut
Summary: Jinki has always hated Minho: his smug smile, arrogant attitude, deep,strong voice, and legs for miles. Minho was what every alpha male should be and he knew it. Jinki hated how perfect Minho was, hated how he always teased him, but lust is a powerful thing and instinct even more so.


Jinki had never felt more content in his entire life. Waking up surrounded by strong arms, a furnace hot body, and a scent to die for had it's advantages. Even his unbelievably sore body wasn't stopping him from enjoying waking up in Minho's bed. He rolled over and watched the taller boy, who was still out like a light. Minho looked so much less... devious in his sleep. He refused to use the first word that had popped into his head, angel, to describe the brat that was now, even in sleep, refusing to let go of him. He couldn't stay like this forever, and he had no doubt that Minho would sleep till dusk like this if you'd let him. Jinki smiled slightly, shook his head, then sighed. Back to reality.

Slowly scooting out from under Minho's arms, only finding freedom by swapping himself out with a body pillow covered with his scent, Jinki stood up and stretched his sore muscles. He hadn't gotten any sleep last night. He swore Minho only let him nap for a half hour after their first time before waking him up to relive all of his sexual fantasies and release his sexual frustration of the past two years on his willing, but unprepared body. Yeah, Jinki was definitely sore. He lost track, had decided to stop counting and questioning Minho's apparently unparalleled stamina after their fourth bout of sex. Could he get pregnant if he wasn't in heat? He wasn't sure, but if he could, then he definitely was after last night, and the majority of this morning.

Scratching his bare stomach absently, he dug through Minho's drawers to find something to wear. He stopped dead after opening the top drawer. Inside it was everything Jinki had ever given Minho, and even some of his clothes he'd left here from so long ago and hadn't bothered to fight to get back. He specifically remembered trying to get his favorite "Rock of Ages" tee back, but Minho had growled defensively and swore up and down he didn't have it. Jinki was now holding the evidence in his hands.

"Oh what a dick..." Jinki started, then halted his words when he smelled exactly who's scent was on the shirt. It smelled like him still, slightly, but it was very faint, Minho's own scent almost overpowering it.

He looked over at Minho who was still sleeping in his bed, noting how he was snuggling (strangling) the body pillow and inhaling deeply, his breaths sounding happy, content, satisfied. Had Minho... slept with his things? He turned back to the drawer and took a whiff. Everything inside had his and Minho's scent all over them, though his was slowly fading on all. His "rock of ages" tee having the most faint scent of all. Minho's favorite as well, it seemed.

Tears welled up in his eyes, threatening to overflow. What the hell was this? Minho had never once tried to convince Jinki to come back, had never tried to reason with him or ask why he was leaving, but he had needed and missed Jinki so much that he had kept his things and slept with them every night so he could still have his scent around him?

He looked briefly at the bathroom, needing a shower, not wanting Minho's scent and the smell of sex all over him for who he was about to go talk to, but he wanted answers. Now. Walking down the halls of the den until he came to a room he had never been to, but knew instinctively  who it belonged to, he sighed.


"Jonghyun," he knocked lightly, then impatiently when he got no reply.  "Jjong, open up, it's Jinki." Still no answer. "Fuck it," Jinki muttered, kicking the door down easily and marching into Jonghyun's unbidden territory. What he saw surprised him, but at the same time didn't surprise him at all. Jonghyun was snuggled in the center of a California king sized bed with what seemed like hundreds of pillows overflowing onto to the ground beneath. He slept with a pack of pillows and stuffed animals. Go figure. He even noticed one little white wolf with light blue eyes, beaten and torn, but appeared to have been stitched up quite a few times. Maybe he shouldn't be here...

Jinki walked over and nudged the still dead to the world boy. What kind of wolf was he? Not even hearing a door being kicked down, he was almost as bad as Minho. Or maybe just more stubborn? Doubt it. Jinki slapped the dino's face hard, a few times, before Jonghyun mumbled, "Not now Minho, I'm having the best dream... and you need to shower, you smell like..." Jonghyun squinted one bleary eye open to look up and mumbled, "Jinki..." slightly surprised, but still way too tired to comprehend much.

And that was how Jinki came to be in Jonghyun's room, helping him clean and assort the thousands of stuffed animals on his bed in a specific order, after having gone and made them a huge breakfast of ten pancakes and 5 pounds of bacon each. Jinki wanted answers, but Jonghyun wanted a slave it seemed in return. When Jonghyun pulled out his karaoke machine from his closet, Jinki had had enough.

"Look. I heard you guys that day in the woods. That time you and Minho were discussing how wrong I was for him." Jonghyun stopped what he was doing and looked up.

"So? What does that have to do with anything? You knew you were all wrong for him in the first place. Well not anymore, and I'm sorry for that, but you know what I thought. But now that you can get preggers and shit now.. well you get the point. Minho's my best friend, I only wanted what was best for him."

"Right. So I was going to call out to you guys when I heard Minho saying all those things and you agreeing, and I.. I left. I couldn't handle it. And I broke up with him the next day."

"I'm sorry, you what? You heard all the bad things, then left before Minho had explained he would still have you as his mate, how he'd even give up being Alpha and leave the pack for you? Isn't it just like you to hear all the bad things then leave before the truth comes out. You're almost as much of a drama queen as Key is. Jeeze."

Jinki sat down on Jjong's bed in shock. It had all been a misunderstanding? He looked up at the smirking boy above him, debating on whether or not he would lie about this. But all of his emotions and even his body language were sincere, and were telling Jinki he was an utter idiot for holding onto this grudge for two years and not sorting it out in the first place. Jinki felt the same way, shell shocked at this revelation.

"Hey," Jonghyun waved his hands in front of Jinki's face wildly. "You need to shower, you can use mine if you want, my show of thanks for you making brekkers, but you still have to do the dishes, don't even think about leaving them in here!"

Jinki went through the motions in the shower, still thinking over everything he had just learned. All he had had to do back then was believe in Minho, trust him, but he had been scared, upset at himself for not being good enough. All Minho had had to do was discuss it with him, tell him that he was accepting the mating bond those years ago, accepting Jinki himself no matter what he was or wasn't or what other people thought. They were both idiots, just another reason they were perfect for each other it seemed. Joon would be happy for him. Jonghyun was ecstatic, humming and singing to himself things like "matchmaker" and a song he didn't recognize, some jumbled lyrics in english "stand by me" flitting through the bathroom door.

He emerged, fitting rather well into the shorter boys clothes, and grumbling his thanks as he was picking up the dishes from breakfast and heading out the door.

"Hey you should come back some time and do karaoke with me! There's this great duet called "Like a Man" that I bet we would rock on!" Jonghyun shouted down the hallway after Jinki, who was only half listening.


He stood in front of Minho's door, a room he had only just left an hour ago, though it felt like years, and inhaled deeply. Walking through the door and closing it gently behind him, he walked over to his still sleeping mate and placed his hand on Minho's face gently, "Hey..." Jinki realized now how foolish he had been, that he should have never let this amazing boy go. He admitted to himself how much he had needed him these past few years, how much he needed him even now that everything felt right between them.

Minho yawned and stretched naked on the bed before whispering, "Hey yourself," and smiling that heart breaking smile of his and pulling Jinki onto the bed with him. They had a lot to discuss, and the rest of their lives to do so... but it could wait a few more hours...

~Four year later~

Jinki stood next to his mate, content, looking at three angels playing in the moonlight. Two twin boys identical to Minho in every way, and one girl with Minho's big eyes but Jinki's perfect smile ran around wildly attempting to catch fireflies. She growled and tackled one of the twins, biting his tail, then looked back innocently at her parents when both boys ran to tattle; she'd be a heart breaker for sure. She was already showing empathic abilities much like Jinki and his mother, an omega in the making.

His father had stepped down from the head alpha position three years ago after hearing how Minho was finally happily mated and with a pup on the way, then everything had just sort of... fell into place. His mother Sunny couldn't have been happier, and the grandchildren revelation nearly bowled her over.

Minho and Jinki still weren't perfect, though who was? They still fought, he was still as stubborn as a mule (as Minho put it), but Jinki was the happiest he had ever been. He rubbed his bulging stomach absently, only having two more months to go till their fourth blessing was brought into the world. He felt Minho's eyes on him and looked up with a frown on his face. "What?"

"Just staring at the most perfect thing in the world," Minho whispered into Jinki's ear, biting it gently. He may be pregnant, but there were ways to work around that. Minho was insatiable after all, hence the three kids with the fourth on the way.

Jinki shivered but pretended to ignore the obvious invitation, instead looking at his perfect children, then up into the night sky, the full moon, and sighing at the perfect atmosphere of it all, but simply saying, "The moon is beautiful tonight."

"Baby, the moon ain't got nothing on you..."

The End

A/N: So... this is it, guys! Can you believe it?! It's been a fun ride, let me tell you! And I couldn't have done it without all the loving and helpful comments from all of you! You all rock my socks off. So Jonghyun saved the day! Woot woot! See I don't hate him! I had plans for the little rascal all along! I really liked his part in this story, he's so dramatic and passionate. How he is in real life, really. And oh my gosh have you guys heard them sing "like a man" by fly to the sky together? It is so beautiful! Their voices are so different but blend so well! I could almost see me writing a Jongyu at sometime, but it'd prob just be a oneshot, nothing too serious lol I still need to plan out my next fic, which will either be a Joonew or another Onho, what do you guys think? I have a general idea, just flip flopping with the main pairing idea! Anywhoooo, leave your love and honest opinions in the comments below! And look, ONHO BABIES! hahaha

I'll see you in future fics, lovely readers! <3



( 49 comments — Leave a comment )
Jul. 2nd, 2012 06:58 am (UTC)
Spot for the lovely bloochibi jajaja!

Edited at 2012-07-02 07:22 am (UTC)
Jul. 2nd, 2012 06:22 pm (UTC)

Before I do though, I must mention this:

This is Joon, somewhere, when this chapter was taking place

Nahhh jk he's happy for onho he'll find somebody to love

I feel that, because this is your final chapter, I must shower spam you with gifs.

The Jongyu made me really happy. Jonghyun is such a dweeb omg I just can't

And he's all making him his slave and trying to hang out with his and it's so cute. :3


He's like, "you didn't even hear the entire thing" And Jinki's like:




"Hey yourself..."

And I'm over here like:

"Hey..." Jinki realized now how foolish he had been, that he should have never let this amazing boy go.

... YEAH.


Awww bb. I can't believe it's over. The ending was so great <3 I think you wrapped it up nicely, with happy family!onho, but still mentioning that they did have their share of problems; it made it believable and amazing because their love and still withstand all that and sorry I'm rambling now oh geez. That was a really fun story to read and it was so good~! I enjoyed it a lot. obviously, lol

Great job ;A;

And now I shall await your Joon fics.

I just love Jonghyun

Okay. I'll stop now.
Thanks for writing and sharing as always, Lanna~
I wuv you is that okay

Jul. 3rd, 2012 01:59 am (UTC)
You.... you can spam me for the rest of my life.... You just summed up the entire story in frickin' GIFS?! How amazing ARE YOU?! We will for sure be bling bling buddies fo LIFE! <3 And I love you right back, damnit! Your comments are like stories to me, I can't wait for the next one! And my next fic will be a Joonew! I've decided, though not everyone will be happy about it, but I couldn't stop thinking about it at work and meh, it's gonna happen! Joon needs loving! I know... poor Joon in this last chapter. I bet he was hoping Minho would screw up again sigh. I slightly was (naw onho was made for this fic lol). But I love how the ending turned out. Cheesy and fluffy and yayyyyy! *glomps to death for being so amazing, then revives to do it again*
Jan. 11th, 2014 01:34 am (UTC)
Can I just say that your comment is the best one I've seen in like ever. :3 Sorry for interrupting your convo with the awesome writer. v^_^
Jan. 11th, 2014 04:34 pm (UTC)
I completely agree with you! Thunder (bloochibi) has always been a goddess at gif spamming! She's an amazing writer too, you should check her out as well, though she doesn't write anymore TAT
Jul. 2nd, 2012 06:59 am (UTC)
Spot for the always supportive onhoing !!
Jul. 2nd, 2012 01:29 pm (UTC)
woohoo i has a spot and i commented down there /points/ xD /bricked/

anw, ohmahgosh bb! congrats on finishing this awesome fic of yours! ugh asdfghjkl i'm so glad i clicked the link to this. srsly. /sobs/

again, thank you so much you awesome person you, for writing and sharing this! ouo /tackles and glomps you/ ♥

and now, i am off to re-read it again xD yaaaaaaaayyy~ /flies away to re-read/
Jul. 2nd, 2012 03:09 pm (UTC)
I'm really happy so many people got to come on this roller coaster ride that is this fic with me! I really didn't expect it to end so soon but I was writing it and it just... happened xD I wonder if I should write a guideline for each chapter in the future instead of just wingin' it! lol Thanks for all of your lovely comments and support every step of the way, I couldn't have finished this story without all the love and support! <3 *get tackled* Enjoy the re-read!
Jul. 2nd, 2012 07:13 am (UTC)
What? It's over already? I still want more =3
Jjong-ah *says it in Onew's tone* you're my new favorite person today. Need to cuddle you Jjong, along with Onew in your plushie-filled bed can't resist the Jongyu, cause they are my otp =P for revealing the truth to Onew.
I bet they went at it like rabbits the moment they officially mated, that would explain the many babies they had.
Your next story will be Joonew or still OnHo where is my Jongyu???? ;______; right? Does it mean you already have the plot but just confused about the main pairing?
Jul. 2nd, 2012 07:21 am (UTC)
I know, I wasn't planning on it being over this soon it just sort of... happened xD and I know, bling bling was cute and crazy in this story, it did kind of make me see how Jongyu would work well. Maybe a oneshot in the future for them who knows? We'll see! And the rabbits analogy is completely correct. Might go back sometime and write an extra smut chapter just about their baby making escapades! And yes! I have a new plot, but just debating on Joon or Minho being the main love interest for Onew. Onew will always be the center of my stories unless I write about a band other than SHINee ^.^ He's just too precious! Thank you so much for all the love and beautiful comments you brought to this story! <3 expect more stories soon!
Jul. 2nd, 2012 07:27 am (UTC)
Let Onew in love with both it can create so much drama and angst?
And I will wait for your other stories forever especially my Jongyu and the baby making part XD
Jul. 2nd, 2012 07:32 am (UTC)
I'm terrible with love triangles! Angst is not my friend! I prefer fluffy smuttiness haha I can't imagine one of them being so sad and alone while the other two are happy >.< Joon's part in this, though so mild, made me so sad for him sigh! We'll see! I bet more people want onho but I might just sway toward Joonew since they don't get enough love anyway!
Jul. 2nd, 2012 10:38 am (UTC)
*nods along with you* crossover is rarely shipped -_-
They definitely need our love, Joonew I mean.
*waits patiently for the new story*
Jul. 2nd, 2012 08:21 am (UTC)
oo it ended so soon but i love it so fluffy at the end and their little babies so so so cute. i would love for your next fic to be onho again but i will read even if it's a joonew btw jjong i love you for what you did *high five-ing him* and of course hugs for you Lanna
Jul. 2nd, 2012 02:54 pm (UTC)
I know, but if I would have kept going I know I would have gotten stuck, and I had to finish the story for everyone! lol there will definitely be more onho in the future, but I'm still debating! *hugs back* thanks for reading through to the end and being so supportive! And I will forever love your userpic! <3
Jul. 2nd, 2012 11:13 am (UTC)
ughhh how i love this :'))) it's so cute jinki is still stubborn and minho is still horny as every xD!! this was wonderful ty for sharing it :3
Jul. 2nd, 2012 02:59 pm (UTC)
xD yeah they'll never really change too much from those two personality traits haha! Poor Onew he's like, I'm never having kids! *and then Minho walks into the room* well okay, I guess one kid wouldn't hurt... Four years later bam! Four kids! And he doesn't show signs of stopping! Good luck with that Onew! hahaha

I'm so happy you loved the story, thank you for all the support every step of the way! <3
Jul. 2nd, 2012 12:55 pm (UTC)
awww... its the end already? i wonder what happened to joon.. (smacks self, pardon for my joonew-fetish showing)... its been a while since i read a multi chap onho fic and those shows that shinee are attending without minho are not helping sate my onho needs.. LOL... and i miss these two.. really.. that's why i kept smiling like an idiot when i watched a fancam in their yeosu concert performing 'Hello'.. it has been a while since i last saw them dance that (esp the onho part)..

anyways, back to the story (sorry for the randomness there), the ROA t-back, really... XD nice of you there for using jjong in a good way.. haha.. thought he wouldn't really care when it comes to those two..

i like how cheesy the last line is... like a romantic scene... oh god and i'm imagining.. haha...

nice work (and nice way of conveying nc17/smut parts in a not-so-smutty/hardcore way too! :D) hope you'll continue writing more fics.. and i really appreciate, and am thankful for your fast updates (though i wasn't really commenting in all chaps... i was saving for the finale..) ^^

'til your next fic!
Jul. 2nd, 2012 03:06 pm (UTC)
I didn't bring up Joon because I want him with no one but Onew xD so he can just be happy babysitting Onew's bratty kids in this lmao Since I notice you have an *ahem* Joonew fetish as well, would you be all for the next multichaptered fic being Joonew and not onho? and oh my gosh their beautiful hello moment! They always smile so happily to eachother during that! Just make out already! >.< and c'mon! Ondrew is so sexy! I had to allude to it hahahaha

The first time I wrote this fic, jjong had very strong feelings for Minho and considered Jinki competition. And I was like, nope, gonna make him a little demonic shoulder angel instead! I don't know if he really does care for Jinki, but he wants his best friend happy! and I know... that last line sigh... I had to tie in the title. I just had to. I knew I would end it that way.

For my future fics I'm sure I'll still update a little faster with a little shorter chaps like this one since everyone seemed to like it that way! Thank you so much for reading and sharing your love of this story with me, I can't tell you enough how happy that makes me! *huggles*
Jul. 3rd, 2012 02:55 pm (UTC)
me too!!! i only want joon for onew, same case with minho... that's why i always crave for stories where there is a love triangle between the three and onew is always left to choose between them. but those stories are very rare and luckily i have only found one (idk if fanfics like these are just eluding me or they just appear once in a blue moon XD).. and joon was the bad guy there, and there was a character death... so its sad.. :'(

speaking of ondrew, i miss jinki on stageplays.. i wish there was a dvd of BWB and RoA, not just fancams.. XD oh but if they're schedule had those never-ending travel from other countries, shows here and there, plus concerts (be it major or not), he better keep his free time sleeping and eating chicken... dont want him being hospitalized like what happened at the beginning of the year..

and your next fic is about joonew?! oh my, i cant wait! ^-^/ and im already curious what would the plot be... hmm... (--,) and i like these kind of updates too, though not too long, you're indeed fast..! i was kinda hesitating to read your fics at first though i am seeing it at shinee replay.. but when i noticed the time/days of your updates... ooohh... not bad... and yeah, that's when i decided to read it... (because there are multi chap fics that are taking forever to have a next chapter, to the point that sometimes i even cant remember what the flow of the story was! XDDD)

thank YOU for sharing this... ^_____^ *huggles*

PS. can minho still be on your next fic? hehehe... ^-^

Jul. 3rd, 2012 03:12 pm (UTC)
me too!!! i only want joon for onew, same case with minho... that's why i always crave for stories where there is a love triangle between the three and onew is always left to choose between them. but those stories are very rare and luckily i have only found one (idk if fanfics like these are just eluding me or they just appear once in a blue moon XD).. and joon was the bad guy there, and there was a character death... so its sad.. :'(

speaking of ondrew, i miss jinki on stageplays.. i wish there was a dvd of BWB and RoA, not just fancams.. XD oh but if they're schedule had those never-ending travel from other countries, shows here and there, plus concerts (be it major or not), he better keep his free time sleeping and eating chicken... dont want him being hospitalized like what happened at the beginning of the year..

and your next fic is about joonew?! oh my, i cant wait! ^-^/ and im already curious what would the plot be... hmm... (--,) and i like these kind of updates too, though not too long, you're indeed fast..! i was kinda hesitating to read your fics at first though i am seeing it at shinee replay.. but when i noticed the time/days of your updates... ooohh... not bad... and yeah, that's when i decided to read it... (because there are multi chap fics that are taking forever to have a next chapter, to the point that sometimes i even cant remember what the flow of the story was! XDDD)

thank YOU for sharing this... ^_____^ *huggles*

PS. can minho still be on your next fic? hehehe... ^-^
Jul. 3rd, 2012 07:53 pm (UTC)
I would buy those dvds in a heartbeat! And no, no hospitals anymore for our babies! And yeah multi chaptered fics that are super slow updates scare me, because I always find myself craving more and sometimes it can take weeks or month to get one update ugh. I'm glad you enjoyed the fic! And yes, though it's Joonew, Minho will be in it! <3
Jul. 2nd, 2012 01:26 pm (UTC)
asdfghjkl congrats on finishing this awesome fic bb! /tackles and glomps you/ ouo ♥ i absolutely, without a doubt, enjoyed it! thank you so much for writing and sharing it :)
Jul. 2nd, 2012 03:06 pm (UTC)
Get back up to your spot where you belong! hahaha
Jul. 14th, 2012 06:53 am (UTC)
I should be in bed but found your Onho chaptered fic after reading the Onho one shot and the first chapter of Joonew fic, and I couldn't stop! I love, love, love this fic and your writing! I love how you characterized Minho and Jinki and how tumultuous but loving their bond is. My only complaint is that I wish it was much longer because I didn't want it to end! At least I can look fporwatrd to Joonew fic! Keep up the awesome work, please! Tracking you now and thanks for the great reads!!
Jul. 14th, 2012 01:22 pm (UTC)
^.^ I'm glad you enjoyed it! The Moon Ain't Got Nothing on You was super fun to write! After so many chapters, however, I kinda got to a stopping point and everything was resolved so I had to end it! I'm sorry! lol Thank you for the super nice comment TAT I am not WORTHY! <3
Jul. 25th, 2012 02:22 am (UTC)
Wow. Just... wow.
That was really good. Thank you for sharing your work with us.
Jul. 25th, 2012 03:15 pm (UTC)
^.^ I'm glad you enjoyed it! I had a ton of fun writing it! Look forward to the next onho chaptered fic! If you like more supernatural fanfiction still dealing with SHINee, though I may get into other groups as well, then stay tuned cause that's all I plan on writing! <3
Sep. 17th, 2012 06:32 pm (UTC)
PERFECT! i always wanted to read Onew preggo and here you granted my wish <3


and i can't believe it's your first fic and smut wow! IT'S SO EFFIN PURRFECT!


i wuv you <3

Sep. 18th, 2012 02:41 am (UTC)
Thank you so much! I debated on taking this down and rewriting it, but everyone seems happy with it so I'll leave it be!

Luv you too! Wif all my Onew loving heart!
Feb. 18th, 2013 07:17 pm (UTC)
holy father mother. i just found this fic. and read it in one go. i like it sfm, omg this is perfect;w;
the way how you described their feelings
hnnggg my fave otp and onho feels ♥
thanks for writing this
the smut parts were so good (≧▽≦)/~┴┴
Feb. 19th, 2013 04:11 am (UTC)
O///O Thanks! I'm glad you loved it! I can't believe that when I first wrote this I thought I'd never write smut again. HAH! lol

If you liked this, you might wanna check out my new omegaverse onho called An Act of Dominance! They're wildcats instead of wolves, but it's similar! And my oneshot Mine to Possess is a werewolf onho as well. Pretty much, I only write onho (with a few joonew thrown in there sometimes and 2woo) haha so if you like that, you should check out my other stories! :D

Thanks for reading and giving me your feedback! It makes me super happy! <3
Mar. 15th, 2013 04:07 pm (UTC)
Omg this story is so good. It's beautiful. I love it. The way you write makes my heart tug ;-; your writing skills is daebak. You got me into these kind of stories with alphas and omegas. In fact this story is so cute. I love every single part of it. Ok I'm repeating but I don't care haha. It's a wonderful story. I love the bonding part the most. The description was O.O (Y) I'm now reading all your other fanfics. ^^ writer fighting \^^/
Mar. 26th, 2013 04:58 pm (UTC)
I am honored! Thank you so much! I try my best to get everyone into more of the paranormal stuff, especially onho ^.^ I'm sorry you came at a time when I was out of commission, but I'm back! Normally I'm not gone for so long! Thank you for reading all of my other works and supporting me! It means a lot! <3
May. 23rd, 2013 09:27 am (UTC)
before i comment about the fic.. im really sorry because im being rude not comment from chapter 1..
this is so fucking beautiful story. i can't stop my self for reading until the final chapter... ;__;.. you are really great author...

how you even make this plot??????
fantasy and onho is the most thing i like in this world... you now you are being my fav author.... >____<

i love mpreg tough... and i love you more for making this fanfic...

please making another mpreg onho... kekekekekeke

i will read another one.. and i will comment from chapter 1.... XD....

May. 23rd, 2013 04:25 pm (UTC)
Aww, you don't have to comment from the first chapter! Especially if it's a finished fic! I'm glad you liked it! I think this and my Joonew chaptered fic will always be my favorites, though Hunger For Your Blood that I'm writing now I absolutely LOVE as well :)

No idea how I make plots to be honest, usually I have dreams similar to them, but I always try to make my stuff original, I don't want there to be any others out there! I just really like out of this world kind of stories! Awww I'm your favorite author??? Thank you so much! I don't hear that too often but it makes me very happy!

The only other mpreg fic I've written was How To Train Your Dragon, but I like the theme of mpreg so I might write another one some day! Especially since I love omegaverse so much, mpreg is much more accessible!

I hope you enjoy my other works!
Jul. 26th, 2013 01:13 am (UTC)
such a beautiful ending... and I loved Jonghyun. he's so funny XD
I'm saving this fic!
Thanks for wrting such an amazing story. :)
keep writing onho fics
Jul. 26th, 2013 01:20 am (UTC)
Seriously, thanks so much! I loved Jonghyun in this, he was such a little shit xD

I will always write onho, there just isn't enough of it in this world for how perfect they are <3

Thank you again! *bows and hugs*
Jan. 6th, 2014 05:11 pm (UTC)
Ahh...that last line is so cheesily adorable. :)
Jan. 6th, 2014 06:44 pm (UTC)
>.< I'm a total cheeseball at heart, what can I say! I feel really bad that you have to read all these non proofread things though! xD if you ever want to read my stories that are at least somewhat proofread and have added bonus scenes and what not, I have updated each and every one of my stories, if only a little on a few, on my AFF account of the same username ^^

This is my first story and I love it to death, but good lord I write so different now it makes me embarrassed, but it'll always be my very first baby!<3 I'm really happy you liked it!
Jan. 6th, 2014 07:28 pm (UTC)
Ok cool for the heads up on AFF. I will look for you over there, I have the same name too. :) lol the writing is still good and any mistakes made are so minimal I'm not noticing and I usually notice. Happy writing!
Jan. 6th, 2014 08:03 pm (UTC)
No problem~ I sent ya a friend request on there (stalker tendencies? Don't be absurd xD) Thanks again! <3
Jan. 6th, 2014 08:46 pm (UTC)
Thanks I'll see you in future comments! Bahaha!
Jan. 6th, 2014 08:50 pm (UTC)
Sounds like a plan! :P
Jan. 11th, 2014 01:41 am (UTC)
What can I say, iloveditsomuchireaditallinonego You really had me at the stubborn Jinki and the ever persistent Minho! They were so adorable and like yin and yang that balanced everything out! I was kinda hurt when Jinki heard Jongho's convo, but felt so fluffy when Minho was even willing to give up pretty much his life just for Jinki. :"> And picturing Jjong as the gentle douche he always is, just fits in your story! :> I loved how Jinki finally admitted his love for Minho and how Minho was so touched he even wanted to cry. ^_^ And the Onho babies are just the cherry on top! Good good good work on this for a first time smut, btw. :] Oh, and reading this in 2014. ;) I'm gonna scoot over now to your list and read all your Onho fics and maybe some Joonew but not that much coz it sometimes hurts my Onho feels. -_- Haha. Thanks for this darling! ^3^

The last line from Minho just cracked me up! WAYYY BEYOND PERFECT! <3

Edited at 2014-01-11 01:42 am (UTC)
Jan. 11th, 2014 04:40 pm (UTC)
>.< Thank you so much, gypsy! I still cringe when I go back and read this sometimes, but it was my first baby and we have to start somewhere (but good lord my writing has improved exponentially xD) I'm really happy you found this story, but ugh, I reposted it on AFF and fixed the errors and stuff so I almost wished you would have read it on there lol! All of my stories (I'm even posting the joonew up atm) are on there and are revamped! I'm under the same username if you're interested at all, friend me and what not, I love new friends!

But if you are interested in reading How To Train Your Half Dragon, you should really read it on AFF because I added two extra smut scenes, a bonus taoris, and an extra long onho at the end ^^

Thank you! >////< it's kinda my thing to put the title in the story, it's just what I do! Thank you so much for finding me (I don't care the year!) and bothering to comment! Seriously, it makes me so unbelievably happy! *hugs* ~<3
Jan. 12th, 2014 10:04 pm (UTC)
I just found you on AFF! *shaking violently* I can't wait to read all your works! ^_^ And I've noticed most are rated "M". *winks* I see your former works on there too! Okay I'm spazzing right now coz I really loved your aus and omegaverses! TBH I've gotten quite fond of supernatural fics because of you. :3 I'm sooo going to read them all over again. :3 THANK YOU again and thanks for replying, yeobo! *hugs back tightly* <333
Jan. 14th, 2014 01:14 am (UTC)
xD Yeahhhhh I write what I like to call 'fluffnstuff' it's a little bit of everything, but there's always smut! My brain is just a dirty birdy apparently lmao

Because of ME?! >.< UGH. MY FEELS.

No, no, no thank YOU! *jumps around with you* Mwuah!
Sep. 3rd, 2014 10:08 am (UTC)
Dear me, two years to talk? *shakes head*
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